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Pelle Martens's avatar

This is such a strong piece. I felt the exhaustion in it right away, the kind where even hope feels expensive.

Roger Browne's avatar

thank you :) yeah, just what I was going for.

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Roger Browne's avatar

thank you so much! glad you enjoyed it. my assigned challenge was to do it all in 500 words. really focuses the prose :)