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The Quantum Quill's avatar

Lovely sentiment Roger. Enjoyed the style of the guitar in the music.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Words getting shy~ Honestly, yes, sometimes they act like little cats under the sofa~

Odel Asseille's avatar

I love the song’s vibe ✨

Great work though

imi's avatar

I loved the idea behind this! Having a conversation with your muse. I might give it a go. This was beautifully written Roger.

Roger Browne's avatar

thanks:) It was @Gary L Taylor who inspired me to try it 🫶

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Thanks Roger. I think you nailed it pretty well. It's an excellent piece.

Aaliya's avatar

A beautifully woven piece

Monica A Leyva's avatar

Roger. This is so beautiful. Bring on the muse it serves you well.

Roger Browne's avatar

although.. this waking me up at 3 am thing… but hey, that’s the deal :)

Monica A Leyva's avatar

You are preaching to the choir. I’m lucky if I get 3 hours a night.

Keiichiro Iwamoto's avatar

Good evening, Roger. A muse is not a presence that gives orders arrogantly, but seems more like a traveling companion who flies through the sky with us, walks with us, and searches with us. 😇

Miles Hack's avatar

The reading was smooth in this layout, and the tunes went a tad deeper! Great delve here

Hina Gondal's avatar

Beautiful

Roger Browne's avatar

thank you 🫶

Gary L Taylor's avatar

I liked the way this worked out Roger. Muses are interesting to converse with.

It made for a great read and I liked how it worked with the music too.

Roger Browne's avatar

my friend, it was your inspiration! so, thank you for the idea and for re-stacking :)

Pelle Martens's avatar

It reads like someone remembering why they fell in love with writing in the first place. Beautifully done. I love it 😊🤍

Julia Minutillo's avatar

🔥🦉🌀 Nice

Roger Browne's avatar

thank you 🫶

Gathering the Pieces of Me's avatar

Loved this. 🥰

Roger Browne's avatar

thanks! 🫶

unfiltered, unmasked, unbound's avatar

It's beautiful to feel connected to a Muse. I really felt that. I hope you feel the same in mine

Amuse me, Muse!

Come fill my mind

Fulfill my deepest yearns

Thrill the silent space abound

Your song my soul forever calls

Titter me

Enflame my lusts

Of stories yet untold

Inspire endless thought of You

My deepest dreams enthrall

Break this heart

Mute this mind

Til nought but spirit stay

Show me what remain of Me

Beyond my final day

Let me peek at paradise

Inspire me to there

Intoxicate me with your Grace

Your gentle face

In Love's embrace

What beauty yet betide?

Roger Browne's avatar

love that connection! I think it’s important to nurture them, as they do us.

HeartScribe's avatar

Loved this so much, Roger. I listened twice - it was so good. Your muse is on fire today. I keep thinking I need to try more poetry. Enjoyed it!

Roger Browne's avatar

I hope you do, I’m here for it 🤩