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Kelly Trost's avatar

OMG, WOW!

Roger, this is so chill! I adore it, absolutely. Gotta share it with everyone!

Roger Browne's avatar

thank you Kelly!

Kelly Trost's avatar

Youโ€™re welcome, Roger. You are awesome!

Gary L Taylor's avatar

Loved this one, Roger.

Roger Browne's avatar

thank you ๐Ÿซถ

Stefan Baciu's avatar

This is absolutely awesome, Roger. You really got the blues

Lutherin Chasity Taralom's avatar

Love this, sounded almost like being on the run and just living free.

Roger Browne's avatar

yes :) we do what we want. those days a wee bit past for me, but I can still see em!

Lutherin Chasity Taralom's avatar

Haha, I never had that rebellious side growing up. I had siblings who did, and when they got in trouble, I knew it was better to be the golden child lol.

Roger Browne's avatar

I was the oldest of five children, and it was always my sisters to flirted with rebellion, not I. but..

then I left home and was free, for a time ๐Ÿ˜Ž

Lutherin Chasity Taralom's avatar

haha i guess you can rebel now im sorta rebelling lol

Roger Browne's avatar

conformance was never the path, grasshopper ๐Ÿ™

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

Loved it! ๐Ÿฅฐ

Roger Browne's avatar

I particularly liked sticking the ending on โ€˜donโ€™t stopโ€™ rather than trail off with a few bars. experimental me :)

Fragments and the Dark's avatar

You made the right decision! ๐Ÿ–ค

imi's avatar

Loved this. Simply amazing! โค๏ธ

Roger Browne's avatar

thank you Imi, you are forever kind to me ๐Ÿซถ

imi's avatar

And forever will be๐Ÿ˜‰

Lea's avatar

Enjoyed this so much!

Roger Browne's avatar

thank you Lea, was experimenting with structure a bit there, glad you liked it!

Lea's avatar

I did. Are you using Suno?

Roger Browne's avatar

I am, yes :) - I was trying out different styles it has built in, and the rhythm of their sample drove those two word sequences in the lyrics and the song built from there. this style was : Acoustic Chicago Blues Cape Verdean, with weirdness 30% and style adherence 80%

Lea's avatar

When I was acting with a Repertory company, after the show we would sit in the bar and make up blues songs. It reminded me of that.

Roger Browne's avatar

I can dig it :)

Lea's avatar

I knew that you could

Pamala Vallarta's avatar

Really enjoyed this song!

Roger Browne's avatar

thank you Pamala! glad you liked it :)

(Haiku Artist)'s avatar

The rhythm and repetition make this feel like a song that knows exactly what it wants to be. The โ€œParking story / Seeking gloryโ€ refrain is especially catchy. Fun piece, Roger.

Roger Browne's avatar

The two word chunks in the verses, meant to convey more than their length, was one of the goals there :) getting the girl, being the otherโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ˜Ž

(Haiku Artist)'s avatar

Ah, now I see what those two-word chunks were doing! Cleverly packedโ€”and apparently with a mission. ๐Ÿ˜„

(Haiku Artist)'s avatar

Ah, now I see what those two-word chunks were doing! Cleverly packedโ€”and apparently with a mission. ๐Ÿ˜„