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This is such a lovely idea, Roger. I especially like the thought of two imperfect voices becoming something neither could have written alone.

And “poetry collaborates” feels like exactly the right title for the experiment.

Thank you for sharing this. I enjoyed reading it very much.

Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

I love the humility in this. The poem doesn't celebrate one voice over another—it suggests that something new is born only when two voices trust each other enough to write side by side. A beautiful reflection on poetry as shared creation.

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