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James (HVR)'s avatar

It actually made me nervous reading it. I see I never got past so much.

Roger Browne's avatar

glad it wasn’t just me 🤣

James (HVR)'s avatar

The last time I was at a dance was I don't know, three or four years ago, and I still hated it.

AsukaHotaru's avatar

Scuffed shoes, Sears corduroys, and first-date panic had me laughing like a gremlin, sorry, you can call me a gremlin now. XDDD I kept picturing freshman Roger trying to survive cookies, Diana, and a dance floor, then somehow it got sweet in that awkward old-photo way. Army green and copper pants from the catalogue is such a perfect final detail, like yep, romance really did begin with fabric choices and terror. Haha!

Roger Browne's avatar

thanks for reading :) yes, those corduroy pants kinda traumatized me 🤣I still don’t like em.

HeartScribe's avatar

Love this so much, Roger -- and boy, it took me back to my own Sadie Hawkins days. Scared to death...lol.

HeartScribe's avatar

But hey, I'd dance with you!

Kelly Trost's avatar

Hi Roger, I LOVE this!

You are so good at writing formal poetry!

Roger Browne's avatar

if so, it’s but a pale imitation of your poems. 🫶

Kelly Trost's avatar

No way! Uh uh!

Roger, your poetry is awesome. I wouldn’t say that if it wasn’t true.

Crystal Cunningham's avatar

This poem is beautiful. l was a homeless teen and always wanted a night like this no matter how it ended.

Roger Browne's avatar

I imagine. My life was blessed with a home, despite it’s shortcomings :) and this night, was everything I imagined it could be, at the time:)

Nick Hills's avatar

A wonderful jump in the past! Great poem, man!

the stranger's avatar

Beautiful ✨