Quake
an innocent prompt for free form poetry by Fiona Bridges gifted me with this line ‘unable to make a plan’ and the thing just got away from me. Or through me.
Unable to make a plan
while the ground refuses
to stop shaking everything
to pieces and confusion.
Outside in the street
earth ruptures and cracks yaw
then close with suddenness
like a venus fly trap
around fallen cars and trees
Has it only been a minute?
Seems like hours now
but all we can do
is sprawl on the floor,
fingernails clawing the tile
hoping for more purchase
but only breaking nails.
Time stretches further.
The porch groans like
a dinosaur, low, throaty
as it shears from our house
and falls into a fissure.
Janey loses her grip
And her body follows
the tilt of the floor
toward the hole where
the porch once was.
Arms grasping, mouth an O
I let go with one hand
and reach for her
but it’s too late
and I see it, in her eyes,
as her feet cross the
threshold.
No.
I let go completely and lunge.
Grasp her fingertips.
Then a wrist. Nothing
will stop us as we slide
inexorably toward the
fissure. At least, we
will go together.
And as our legs dip
into the hungry earth, the
shaking quits. Like it
never happened.
We scramble back from
the edge and cling
to each other. Tears
and ragged breath
and hearts bursting
with all we can’t say
until our lungs grasp
more oxygen. Love
You, I manage. Maybe.
We should get. Some
distance from. This edge?
She smiles. Yeah. That.
Sounds good.


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Roger, this pulled me in immediately. The quake feels vivid and terrifying, but the emotional core is what stayed with me. And that ending is perfect, tender, authentic, and beautifully human. Great work.
Monica